Feedback from pitch

People seemed to like my idea for my music video. Te only problem they actually had with it is the length of the song as itsself and keeping the same thing over and over could get boring very quickly. An idea that I had from another student for my feedback would be to use that idea but mix it with live footage of a rave to take place with some strobe lights and to cut own the time of the song.

Another idea that I was given was to have a face and them to sing the lyrics but the lights are on the face instead of the skin and they are mimicking the music in time.